Editing and rewriting part of the first draft

As the title suggests, please read through the first draft and make changes according to the comments. I guess the paper is too general at this very moment, so please spend some time narrowing down the scope as asked by my professor. I welcome any comments and questions so that we can have less revisions down the road. Thank you and looking forward to seeing your work.

 
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